I used two different writing prompts for this scene. I'm actually going to use this scene as part of my next book in the Mafia Hearts series. Enjoy!
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Sebastian grabbed Mia’s hand and guided her down the sidewalk
under the dreary evening clouds. They tried to stick to the shadows looming
between the tall buildings where alleys started their own pathways, but that
wasn’t always plausible. She patted her 9mm for the fifth time since climbing
out of Sebastian’s black Sedan. The cold steel in the waistband of her jeans
and Sebastian’s large frame towering over her gave her a sense of security
while away from the bright lights of the Vegas strip. Sebastian was taking her
on her first real mafia job. And she didn’t know if she should be excited or
scared. Maybe a little bit of both, she supposed.
“One
thing to remember,” Sebastian said with a wave of his hand as if they were
talking about the weather instead of serving as mafia enforcers, “Sometimes
legends make reality. Our boss, Enrico, made this reality for us. He is our
legend. As long as you remember that, you’ll do well in the biz.”
The dimly
lit “open” sign flickered against the dirty window up ahead. A sign announcing
Las Vegas’ best massages hung above the door. No business name. None was needed
here. Everyone knew you went in, picked your woman, paid for a massage, and
ended happy. Simple as that. Even the cops knew. What people didn’t know was
that the Medini crime family had a hand in this particular business and Mia
came for payment.
Her hand
trembled as she reached up to twist a strand of her straight ponytail around
her finger. Sebastian pushed her hand back down to her side. “Don’t be nervous,”
he hissed. “If you are not tough they’ll walk all over you.”
“Sorry,”
she mumbled as he reached for the nod. Before turning it he paused and then
stepped back.
“You go
first. I want to see how well you do with introductions.”
She
pushed the door open and stepped inside, trying not to gag on the mildew laden
air. A row of empty chairs lined one wall. A desk in the center of the room.
One painting, as dingy as the front window, hung on the far wall. A string of
bells hanging from door handle banged against the wood when the door swung shut
behind them. A scrawny man, who appeared to have taken one too many hits on a
meth pipe, scurried into the lobby.
“You
lookin’ for work, sugar?” He offered a broad grin while he kept his fingers
busy by running them through his greasy hair.
“Not hardly,”
Mia said, a frown etching the corner of her lips.
He snapped
his fingers, signaling five females to file one-by-one into the room. “Take
your pick then. I have everything you want.”
She held out her hand. Upon contact she pulled up the hem of her shirt, revealing her gun. “The name’s Mia. I came to collect the rent.” Before the man could get a word out, she twisted his wrist, turned him around, and shoved his face against the cheap desk. “Do you have what I came for?”
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Want to start the series from the beginning? You can find the first book here: Dangerous Flames, book 1
It's interesting that she uses physical force right away. I wasn't expecting that!
ReplyDeleteShe really took to the role of enforcer, didn't she? Format-wise, there is one paragraph that is center-justified instead of left. Other than that, it looks great. I'd be interested to read her background and how she got in with the family.
ReplyDeleteI want more! What happens next? Thanks for a glimpse of your story process.
ReplyDeleteShe's a tough cookie! What an interesting twist!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you developed this. You led us right into a trap where we'd be surprised. The gritty language is excellent as well. I felt drawn into the scene and, of course, now I want to know more about these people.
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